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Originally Posted by kamel Im supposed to write a 1 page review of a book and how it effected me. Please check for any mistakes. Thanks in advance. Book: She’s Come Undone Having read a number of books in my time. Ranging from the provocative ‘Roots’ to the bittersweet award winning novel ‘Angela’s Ashes’, none have accomplished the goal of affecting me so much as ‘She’s Come Undone’. The tale is written in the first-person narrative and depicts the life of an ordinary girl placed under extraordinary circumstances and how she hides behind an overweight, confused and pessimistic persona. |
Simplify! Say something like: "This book affected me deeply." (Not
much) Use your own words.
