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 Re: What can I change with my book review?
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Originally Posted by kamel
In the high school I am currently studying, there enrolls an obese student who is way too offensive and loud. I never really took to this student when I first met him. It seemed I was not alone in this matter because most of my peers were pretty cruel to him. Now this student would always laugh it off and retort with an equally cruel comment. Thinking it was all playful humor, I did not pay it any heed. Only after reading this novel did I realize that his larger than life personality was made by him to cover up the struggling hefty boy within. Thankfully I can say I befriended him and now stand up for him during the fierce class room brawls. As I regard it, I feel I owe him more for his friendship than he does for mine.
| Say: In the high school where I am currently studying there is enrolled an obese student who is way too offensive and loud.
(You are not studying a high school  )
Say: As I regard it, I feel I owe him more for his friendship than he owes me for mine.
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