Hi,

Could you check and correct my CV and cover letter, please?

The text of my cover letter:

7 February 2005

Dear Ms./Mr. ...........................

I found out from the www.reed.co.uk web site of your need for an data entry clerk. I am sure that my recently completed education and work experience make me a strong candidate for the position. Please find attached a copy of my CV.

I graduated from the Warsaw School of Economics in 2004 with a Master’s degree in Business Administration. It is the best school of economics in Poland. While working towards my Master’s degree I was employed as an office worker in Commune Office in Poland. I gained a broad knowledge of working within office environment. I worked as a part of a team and I received a lot of compliments from my co-workers. I am convinced that my education and work experience have prepared me for the position in Your company. As Poland is a member of the European Union I need no work permit to work in the United Kingdom.

I am open and communicative but at the same time exact and have a sense of duty. I tend to get very engaged in all my activities, even if they are after hours. I am an enthusiastic worker, and enjoy working in a team.

The position you outline is one, which I feel can enhance my practical background. I am sure I could apply the combination of my knowledge and experience to your business. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss the job vacancy with you on the telephone or at an interview. I can be contacted most easily on my mobile or by e-mail (see details at the top of this letter).

Yours sincerely,

Pawel Wozniak



The text of my CV:


CURRICULUM VITAE

Personal data:

name: Pawel Wozniak
address: ul. Zamkowa 120, 00-250 Warsaw
date of birth: 10 March 1978
e-mail: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
phone: 0048 22 123 45 67

Education:

2002 - 2004 Warsaw School of Economics, Warsaw, Poland
Master's Degree in Business Administration
1999 - 2002 Higher School of Finance and Banking, Radom, Poland
Bachelor's Degree in Business Administration

Work experience:

11.2000 - 05.2001 Commune Office, Jasieniec, Poland
office worker in the Local Development Department; mainly office work (worked as part of team involved in the development of the local area)

Skills and Other:

languages: Polish - native
English - very good (knowledge of Business English)
Russian - conversational
computer skills: perfect: MS Office (Word, Excell, Access, Power Point),e-mail, Internet; very good: Adobe Photoshop CS, Paint Shop Pro, Effective Site Studio (making www sites), ability to work with various operation systems
hobbies: books, Internet, computers, history of the Second World War, biking
others: driving licence

Other activities:

2000 - 2001 preparing articles for the local newspaper
1994 - 1999 member of the local football team


Thanks in advance for your help