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Old 03-Mar-2005, 02:39
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Default Re: Learnign how to write

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Originally Posted by englisha
thank you very much...

Instead of : "The instruments were carefully designed to prevent the noise that may be caused when two cultures are compared."

Do sounds better: "The instruments were carefully designed to avoid cultural noise in the findings."?


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That's OK, if you like the use of 'noise' here.
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