My first comment is that you call him 'Wiston'. Isn't he 'Winston'? You also write 'tough' instead of 'thought' quite a few times.
Here's an interesting site on the language of 1984:
http://www.newspeakdictionary.com/
And one on all of his work:
http://www.george-orwell.org/
I'll be posting some comments in a bit when I've had a chance to read it all.
