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Old 21-Apr-2005, 01:37
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Default Re: 1984 Essay (Plz correct)

Even Wiston who at this point had no real meaning for living thinks

Fistly, you need a couple of commas:
Even Wiston, who at this point had no real meaning for living, thinks

Do you have a 'meaning for living'? You can have a 'reason for living' or you could say 'Winston, whose life had no meaning..'
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