Thread: Pl. help me to correct the 1st 2 paragraph of a citation
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Old 01-May-2005, 17:42
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Default Re: Pl. help me to correct the 1st 2 paragraph of a citation
1- By the time suggests that the prgress had started earlier.
2- Leav the Beautiful \Mind, maybe just say 'institution'.
'tertiary' is unnecessary.
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