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Old 10-May-2005, 12:40
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Default Re: Need my CV read, too :-)

at the AP-Luftfilter Brandenburg- I'd delete 'the'

my-event Berlin- capitals? This is the name, I presume

of a software - of a program/of software

Education and Qualification-Education and Qualifications
Industrial Environmental Computing“
Bachelor of Science, graduated ‘good’
Final mark: '2.2’ -delete the ". I'd say Bachelor of Science 2.2/2ii (I wouldn't include 'good' as well as the grade- it's not clear what it means)

‘conceptual development of
software for the environmental
controlling to a medium sized
company’- Title Case

presumably appear in print
in August 2005- To be pubished in August 2005...

Languages German: fluently
Languages
German: fluent

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