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Old 24-May-2005, 15:27
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Default Re: Please help me edit my grammar problem

If you are thinking about Aborting your (unborn) child or leaving him or her as an Orphan please read this real story, it might give you pause for thought.

I'm going to read the text now, but I would change the title to this. I'm also not sure about 'orphan'- would parentless/motherless work better?
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