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Old 15-Jun-2005, 04:16
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Default Re: Could you please revise my c.v.

Marital status: Married + 2.- I'd say Married with two children
Qualifications: Bachelor of Journalism-Islamic university. Gaza, 1996 - Grade? Also, as it's a name, say Islamic University. Plus I'd put it on a separate line and give the fulld dates:

Qualifications:
Bachelor of Journalism-Islamic university. Gaza, 1992-1996

4- Participation in the program: The role of the media in a civic society. USA, 1998 (city?- you give the city for Austria, so be consistent)

experiences:- Professional Experience (or Employment)

A part time correspondent- no need for 'a' and hyphenate part-time

Arabic (mother language): excellent in all skills.- as it's your mother tongue, I think there's no need for further qualification

weak in listening- very honest, but I wouldn't put it in a CV

medium- maybe intermediate would be a better term

Again, with headings like 'Languages' I'd put the rest on a new line

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