[HaraKiriBlade]

No Tdol you actually responded a lot faster than expected. I seriously didn't think anyone would read this long letter and provide corrections anytime soon. Thank you very, very much Tdol.

As for your comment, sigh... I know, it's just how my dad wanted it done. My poor English and translation on top of that and, ta da! you have one very offensive letter to behold. Thank you very much for your suggestion. You have no idea how much help you've been to me.

As for my upcoming questions related to this letter, should I write them as replies to this thread or create a new one? I have a whole bunch, many of them being which tense to use in certain time settings. Please let me know.