Thread: [Proofread] ANOTHER complaint letter... gosh I'm such a hater
View Single Post
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 05-Aug-2005, 23:05
Tdol Tdol is offline
Editor, UsingEnglish.com
  
Join Date: Nov 2002
Country: UK
Posts: 25,025
Current Location: Phnom Penh
First Language: English
Thanks: 1
Thanked 192 Times in 187 Posts
Tdol has disabled reputation
Default Re: [Proofread] ANOTHER complaint letter... gosh I'm such a hater
1- On that point/ about that point- fine
2- I wouldn't use 'delivered' here- it might be ambiguous. You could say 'did what they said'.
3- She told me she would go and check on her computer, then came back...
Reply With Quote