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Old 10-Aug-2005, 15:38
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Default Re: Help: to enrich my APPLICATION/RESUME

Please don't use flowery language while writing your employment documents. Be direct and sound professional. Also, I find lots of punctuation errors in the entire document. Sentence constructions are also not up to the mark. In the first sentence, explain how you learned of the position. That will increase the interest of your reader. Your resume and cover letter are so cluttered and full of errors, it will be difficult for your hiring manager to keep reading your entire documents and call you for an interview.

Don't mention gender and nationality in your resume. Make separate paragraphs for your educational and professional qualifications. Clearly mention your job responsibilities of your previous posts. Include a profile/an objective sentence in the beginning of your resume.

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