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Old 12-Aug-2005, 05:50
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Default Re: Help: to enrich my APPLICATION/RESUME

This time, your cover letter and resume are definitely better than the last time.

Please note down the following points:

In the first sentence of your cover letter, explain how you learned of the position. That will increase the interest of your reader.

There are some grammatical mistakes, for eg., in the first sentence you have written "Having doing well in my career", which actually would be "having done well in my career". So, proofread your docuents over and over again.

Explain how appointing you will do good to the company instead of just mentioning that it will do good.

While mentioning your past job responsibilities, use simple past tense to begin your sentences.

Put your educational qualifications in the beginning of your resume.
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