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Old 01-Oct-2005, 07:47
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Default Re: Please help to proof-read my cover letter and CV

employment as a RF Engineer at ASTRI- an RF Engineer
I am excited - sounds a bit too strong to me-
More recently, however,- however sounds negative- how about moreover?
design of Electronic/RF circuit- circuits??
experience in working on teams- in teams
to Engineering industry- to the Engineering Industry
Microwave and RF field is- I'd use 'the' and is this one single field or two?
could be available for an interview, if convenient- am available for interview at your convenie
In the meantime, if- I'd delete 'in the meantime' and replace 'if' with 'should'
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.- Thanking you in advance for your time and co-operation, I look foward... (and start a new paragraph for this line)
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