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Originally Posted by HaraKiriBlade Today I visited this Korean web forum I go and answer questions occasionally.
And I noticed this text introducing Korea's traditional clothing.
And I thought, hey, this is easy enough, I'll correct it. As I actually strated correcting it I realized I'm not good enough for it.
I started like this: "I'd like to talk about a traditional Korean clothing, Hanbok."
And that's when I got myself confused. Should I use a or the, or should I not use any articles at all? what would be the difference between clothes and clothing?"
There are a lot of things in the original text I can correct. At the same time if I get confused with such basics, I haven't been studying English right.
Could you correct the original text for me? thanks in advance! |
I've changed and added some of the words that he/she used to not repeat the same word throught out his paragraph.
I’d like to talk about traditional Korean clothes because they are very delicate. Hanbok was a popular style that Koreans loved to wear a long time ago. Koreans nowaday, however, only wear traditional clothes on their special days because most of them are inconvenient for daily activities. So, a new style has been made called Sanghwalhanbok for those who are uncomfortable wearing Hanbok. There are many different styles of Korean clothing such as Dopo, Dang-ui ect... which all are gorgeous and simple. The special thing about Korean clothes is that their lines are very elegant and fine. Koreans, including myself, are proud of these beautiful clothes.