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Originally Posted by aleycris Sorry RonBee but I don't undestand what you said?
I don't have a good day. :(
Could you give some example?
And the rest of the narration i good gor you?.
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You want to put discussion of the same subject in the same paragraph and discussion of different subjects in different paragraphs. For example, if the subject is work (job, employment) put that in the same paragraph.
Another reason a person might want or need to learn a new language is that he is planning to move to or already has moved to a new country.
While "I don't have a good day" is indeed a grammatical sentence, it is not an English expression. Say
I am not having a good day. (Sorry to hear that.)
I can give you some examples if I am sure of what you want examples of.
The essay is not altogether bad. It just needs a little work.
How are we doing?
:)