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Default Re: [Proofread] Presentation at school 5/5

Last but not the least- no article
harms - uncountable
agility and endurance is crucial - are?
and sense of self-worthlessness- a sense and delete self-
Such not only leaves- such + noun, or use 'This'
activities - activity
such environment- such an
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