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Old 17-Nov-2005, 09:43
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Default Re: correct my grammatical and give better expression please ?

I felt my mother came- come
what the wrong- what is wrong
I am in pain a little bit- I am in a bit of pain
so and so home- so-and-so's home
then return with his- returned
common on- come on
spent a lot of time to convince her to go with that car I spent
and may feeling pain forced her to- amybe the pain forced her to go

PS- Why are you writing on separate lines? You also need to punctuate it.
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