[Tdol]

You need to join it up into paragraphs and conect the sentences. A list of single sentences is very hard to read:

This site covers the latest products and breaking news about modern hardware. These facts and news are presented in summary and you can read the details by clicking in the relevant link.
Etc

Also, look at how many times you use the phrase 'I think'- you should try to avoid such repetition. Firstly, I know it's your opinion, so you're not giving me much information by saying it. However, if you want to say something along these lines, then why not try some variations, like 'in my opinion', 'I consider', etc.