Re: reading log: The Picture of Dorian Gray Thanks, tdol. Moreover, my teacher allowed me to give it to her on Monday, so I am even be able to correct it before...
As to the sentence I wrote (Though they were friends, Basil thought that sometimes the hurting him was making Dorian happy. ) - could I write this instead? Would it be clear what I mean? :
"Though they were friends, Basil thought that Dorian was sometimes happy to hurt him. " |