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Originally Posted by aleycris
On the other hand there are a lot of think that you lost if you live alone. One of then, if you used to had you clothes washing, now you must washing it. What is worse, you must cook for you own or you could call to the delivery. A part from that, you must cleaning your house and do all housework.
  • There are a lot of things you miss when you live alone. No longer do you have someone to do the _______ and _________. When you live alone you have to do all your own ______ and _________. You have to _____ _____ _______. You have to ______ ______, and _____ ______ _____ _____ ___ ___ ______.

What do you think should go in the blanks?

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Originally Posted by aleycris
For my point of view, the most important disadvantage of living alone is that you get used to doing the house work like washing, cleaning or cooking.
Why is that a disadvantage? (You don't need to say from my point of view.)

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In conclusion I believe that the way of living on your own depends on how you are or not used to making the house work.
I am not at all sure I understand that. (You don't need In conclusion there.)

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