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Old 15-Oct-2003, 16:31
aleycris
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This is the essay with our correction, what do you think?

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Some people are trying to live on their own, but depending on the person, living on their own could be a rewarding experience or it could be a disaster.
There are few positive aspect about living alone. You can do whatever you want in your house; for example, if you like red you can paint the wall red. Apart form that you can invite your friends to your house and they would staying with you any hour of the day or night. When you live in your own house you can do whatever you want to do and there is nobody to tell you what to do. The best thing about living on your own is that you are on your own..
On the other hand, there are a lot of things you miss when you live alone. No longer do you have someone to do the cooking and cleaning. When you live alone you have to do all your own shopping and housework. You have to _____ _____ _______. You have to ______ ______, and _____ ______ _____ _____ ___ ___ ______.
In conclusion I believe that the way of living on your own depends on how you are or not used to making the housework.
I don't know what word put on the blanks
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