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Originally Posted by dean1

Hi. My friend needs to summit her entry sheet. Can u pls check the translation for her? Also, pls correct if you find the sentences arent appropriate.
many thanks
Here it goes:

I am a foreign student and I can - delete speak English, Japanese, Mandarin, Malay as well as Cantonese. I want to take an active part on an international stage, thus I decided to start my career from foreign capital enterprise. Although my major is Electrical System, but - delete I am also interested in computer and network related field. And -delete that is why I ventured into the region of that particular field. When I was in college, my graduation research theme was Evaluation of 10Base and 100Base-TX Products. After I had my presentation at The Institute of Electronics, Information and Communication Engineers, it - who are your referring to started me on looking for Information Technology related jobs and putting my knowledge of Electrical System to account. Therefore, by all means I would like to work in a prestigious international financial company and with my IT knowledge and linguistic competence, I believe I can help provide our society a better world.

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