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Old 11-Mar-2006, 22:13
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Default Re: a short letter, could you have a look at it ?

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Hi Tom,
Three days ago I arrived to London. I stay in the Grand Hotel, it isn’t so expensive hotel but very comfortable. Food is very tasty, especially dinners.
Tomorrow I want to visit the Buckingham Palace.
I hope that you have also good time.
See you soon
XYZ
Hi Tom,
Three days ago I arrived in London. I am staying at the Grand Hotel. It isn’t too expensive a hotel but it's very comfortable. The food is very tasty, especially the dinners.
Tomorrow I want to visit Buckingham Palace.
I hope you are having a good time as well.
See you soon.
XYZ

Dear Sir/Madame,
I am writing to you because I reserved through the Internet, and have paid for, a place on the course: ‘English in Two Weeks. Level Pre-intermediate” at your school in Exeter. I have not got any answer from you yet, and so I am starting to become worried.
I have called you three times without answer and have left messages on your answerphone. I am quite concerned about this situation because now I cannot plan my journey. I would ask you to confirm my participation on your course or refund my money.
I hope that this situation can be resolved quickly, because I have heard nothing but good reports about your school.
Thank you for your assistance.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.
XYZ

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