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Old 24-Mar-2006, 20:28
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Default Re: Computer engineer application

Hi,
Don't use such long sentences in your cover letter, like the following.
"The good relations I established with researchers of different disciplines and the varied projects which were entrusted to me have consolidated my desire to blossom myself by working for research, and my interest for your branch of industry and your missions has naturally oriented me towards you. "
Also, you have used a very flowery language. Write in simple lanuage and sound professional.
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