Oh... I've just written reply on your answer and I have deleted it by touching one key!!!
I don't know which it was, but I hate it now...
I am not going to write it again... just shortly:
I got the homework assignment at school (we learn a maturita (a kind of exam) topics and one of them contains "crime")
Thank you for your advice, but I am not going to shorten it. Perhaps the next time when I write something.
And I still have some questions on your correction....
1) I rewrote this:
Quote:
| However, some of them, perhaps, really realize (use different words - repeat of base) the meaning of life not until in the (delete) prison. |
to:
However, some of them, perhaps, realize the meaning of life not until in prison, actually. does it sound the same or does "actually" have different meaning? 2) Quote:
| If we look at this much discussed topic, whether to ban or not to ban this kind of punishment, from the other side, we can see that not a single act of killing criminals is wrong (I cannot follow your logic - killing criminals is right even if innocent people may be considered criminals) – sometimes also innocent people may be considered criminals, may be accused of committing some crime. |
I don't understand you... I said "wrong" (that killing criminals is wrong), not "right"... I am just not sure I wrote it (what I mean) grammatically right. I mean that if criminals are killed for their actions, it is bad. If I wrote "killing criminals" did it mean "criminals who kill people"? Should I write "killing of criminals", then? Do you see what I mean?