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Old 22-May-2006, 02:18
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Default Re: Self-Intoduction,Personality

The different culture, language- cultures, languages
+ The second sentence should begin with 'I like to discover and experience different... (I don't the the word order much of the original)
Then I would like to share them too.- I think this sentence could be removed and the verb 'share' added to the verbs in sentence two- I like to discover, experience and then share...
Although every new stuff is trilled- trilled?????? I don't understand this verb
lay it right on top of what I’m doing today and carry it all forward- this is a bit vague- try to be more specific and clearer- I apply what I have learned from previous experiences to what is happening today...
I always speak and organizing in my mind when I discouraged- I am organised and always speak my mind (the discouraged bit doesn't fit to me)
For me, nothing to worry, just adapt- I adapt instead of woprrying??
Catch every chance- Seizing every...
“More regrets mean that you are more frivolous to your life!”- who are you quoting? Also, do we need exclamatiuon marks here? Most of the time, when you feel like using an exclamation mark, stop and ask if it is really necessary. In the vast majority of cases, they are better removed
I don’t hope I slip any opportunity which benefit to me- let any oppoortunity slip which may benefit me
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