check the sentence plz

[pandu]

hi,

Please check the below sentence and let me know if I did any mistake.
" I have nominated for SRM training and SAP data archiving…If you are also interested, nominate yourselves for these trainings."


Regards,
Manju.

[rmsh16]

hi,

Please check the below sentence and let me know if I did any mistake.
"I have nominated for SRM training and SAP data archiving. If you are also interested, nominate yourselves for these trainings."


Regards,
Manju.

Correct & no amendments required.

[pandu]

HI ,

Thank you very much for your advice..........

and please check the below senteses also ...
1.For OPAL the call counter number should be amendable but for GAMMA/INCLARITY the call counter numbers should not be allowed to amend it.For this ,Can we have a validation on CCGeo amendment or should we need to greyed out the CCGEO column .
2.At the time of 'Order save' ,should we need to call both 'actve' and 'update' service calls or can we call only one service to send the CCGeo details to Service provider.
3.the list of additional telephone numers to be displayed are restricted to 9.what should be displayed if 10 call counter numbers are present for an order line.
are they meaningfull or not? please let me know..so that i can correct myself....
thanks in advance ....