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Old 27-Jul-2009, 02:42
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Is the following expression suitable for a signboard at a food court?


"We prepared a total of 184 seats. Please relax and enjoy your favorite food at any seat.
Please leave the tableware and tray on the table after the meal. We will clear them away."


Thank you in advance.
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Old 27-Jul-2009, 05:04
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Is the following expression suitable for a signboard at a food court?


"We prepared a total of 184 seats. Please relax and enjoy your favorite food at any seat.
Please leave the tableware and tray on the table after the meal. We will clear them away."


Thank you in advance.
It's correct, but I think a bit too many words for a sign at a foodcourt.

I would reduce it. Here's a rewrite.

"Relax and enjoy your food. We clean the tables."


Last edited by PROESL; 27-Jul-2009 at 05:49. Reason: slight content revision
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