Are these sentences correct?

[Zoe2008]

Please advise us the status for the balance payment of USD xxx if the sample is no problem / approve.

As per Stella information, Patrick shall remit USD10,000.00 to us for PO xxx. Please confirm if we receive it, so that I can issue LC to the factory.

[PROESL]

Originally Posted by Zoe2008

Please advise us the status for the balance payment of USD xxx if the sample is no problem / approve.

As per Stella information, Patrick shall remit USD10,000.00 to us for PO xxx. Please confirm if we receive it, so that I can issue LC to the factory.

Is this an internal - interdepartmental -communication? If so, then the message is clear. I've revised your two example sentences.

Please, confirm the balance on our invoice if the sample is approved.

As per Stella's information, Patrick shall remit 10,000.00 USD to us for PO #xxx. Please, tell us when we receive it so that I can issue an LC to the factory.

(note: There should not be a comma before "so" in this case.)

[Anglika]

Originally Posted by Zoe2008

Please advise us of // about the status for the balance payment of USD xxx if the sample is acceptable.

As per Stella's information, Patrick shall remit USD10,000.00 to us for PO xxx. Please confirm when we receive it, so that I can issue LC to the factory.

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