please correct my text

[Zoe2008]

We shall amend LC for the correct beneficiary name accordingly and you need to bear the amendment fee of HKD350.00. Please send us the original documet when you receive the amendment for the comapny name from Helen

[PROESL]

We shall amend LC for the correct beneficiary name accordingly and you need to bear the amendment fee of HKD350.00. Please send us the original documet when you receive the amendment for the comapny name from Helen

By "amendment for the company name", do you mean they are going to adjust the name of the company on their documentation? If this is the case, then here's my rewrite.


We shall amend the LC to show the correct beneficiary name. Please, submit the amendment fee of 350.00 HKD. As well, please, send us the original document when you receive the amendment to the company name from Helen.

note: I don't think it is necessary to use "accordingly".

[Zoe2008]

By "amendment for the company name", do you mean they are going to adjust the name of the company on their documentation? If this is the case, then here's my rewrite.


We shall amend the LC to show the correct beneficiary name. Please, submit the amendment fee of 350.00 HKD. As well, please, send us the original document when you receive the amendment to the company name from Helen.

note: I don't think it is necessary to use "accordingly".

Hi Proesl,

Thanks for the correction. Do you think it should use 'on' for the last sentence? Please comment.

As well, please, send us the original document when you receive the amendment on the company name from Helen.

Regards
Zoe

[PROESL]

Hi Proesl,

Thanks for the correction. Do you think it should use 'on' for the last sentence? Please comment.

As well, please, send us the original document when you receive the amendment on the company name from Helen.

Regards
Zoe

No, I don't think so. I would use "amendment to".

[Anglika]

We shall amend LC with the correct beneficiary name. You are required to bear the amendment fee of HKD350.00. Please send us the original document when you receive the amendment for the company name from Helen

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