Too much load shedding in Pakistan

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11-Aug-2009, 09:45
twilit1988

Too much load shedding in Pakistan

My respected teacher

1: "Too much load shedding in Pakistan. The power will remain off for two days tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. We all will be drowning in sweat. Anyway, I have planned to go to dam to catch fish." Please corrert this sentence?

Thanks in advance!:-D
11-Aug-2009, 11:10
csheywood

Re: Too much load shedding in Pakistan

Quote:

Originally Posted by twilit1988

My respected teacher

1: "Too much load shedding in Pakistan. The power will remain off for two days tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. We all will will all be drowning in sweat. Anyway, I have planned to go to the dam to catch fish." Please corrert this sentence?

Thanks in advance!:-D

'Too much load shedding in Pakistan' - I'm not quite sure what it refers to; do you mean 'There was too much / a lot of load shedding...' I have changed this to be a full sentence but the original could be used if it was an answer to a question.

'for two days tomorrow and the day after tomorrow' - for two days: tomorrow and the day after.
11-Aug-2009, 11:44
debdulaldey

Re: Too much load shedding in Pakistan

There is no such word exist in British English as load shedding. You can use power cut for this purpose. I think he wants to say today, tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.
11-Aug-2009, 12:20
bhaisahab

Re: Too much load shedding in Pakistan

Quote:

Originally Posted by twilit1988

My respected teacher

1: "Too much load shedding in Pakistan. The power will remain off for two days tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. We all will be drowning in sweat. Anyway, I have planned to go to dam to catch fish." Please corrert this sentence?

Thanks in advance!:-D

1: "Too much load shedding in Pakistan. The power will remain off for two days, tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. We all will be drowning in sweat. Anyway, I have planned to go to the dam to catch fish."