please fix my grammar

[acra]

Please correct the following:

1.You don’t take sugar in your coffee, do you?

2.I live in a small, quiet, lovely town in the South of England.

3.I didn’t see Fiona since last Wednesday.

4.I ate an enormous, big dinner.

5.Will we go, then?

6.If there are less than 6 people, we’ll have to cancel the course.

7.No, don’t bother doing it. I have done it already.

8.I’m not sure red suits me.

9.What about a pizza, then?

10.Whenever I was crossing the road yesterday, I was nearly knocked down by a bus.


What's wrong with the above thank you

[Alc112]

I corrected some mistakes (what i know)

Please correct the following:

1.You don’t take sugar in your coffee, do you?

2.I live in a small, quiet, lovely town in the South of England.

3.I didn’t see Fiona since last Wednesday.

4.I ate an enormous, big dinner.

5.Will we go, then?

6.If there are less than 6 persons , we’ll have to cancel the course.

7.No, don’t bother doing it. I have already done it .

8.I’m not sure red suits me.

9.What about a pizza, then?

10.Whenever I was crossing the road yesterday, I was nearly knocked down by a bus.


What's wrong with the above thank you

[Alc112]

I think you have to say "correct my grammar" and not say "fix my grammar"

[Tdol]

1.You don’t take sugar in your coffee, do you?

2.I live in a small, quiet, lovely town in the South of England.
Adjective order- lovely should come first.

3.I didn’t see Fiona since last Wednesday.
Tense- haven't seen

4.I ate an enormous, big dinner.
Repetition- use one of these adjectives

5.Will we go, then?
Shall we

6.If there are less than 6 people, we’ll have to cancel the course.
fewer

7.No, don’t bother doing it. I have done it already. You could use a semi-colon instead of a full-stop)

8.I’m not sure red suits me.

9.What about a pizza, then?

10.Whenever I was crossing the road yesterday, I was nearly knocked down by a bus.
Unless this happened many times, it should be 'when'