Are these sentences correct?

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21-Aug-2009, 02:35
Zoe2008

Are these sentences correct?

Please send us a copy of your debit note (no. xxx) to clarify, as you had deducted USD600.00 from our payment

Mary requested to pull in the schedule from Oct to first of Sept, please expedite your LC to us ASAP

Please release the shipping order to us as early as you can, we expected deliver the goods next week. looking for your promptly reply.
21-Aug-2009, 03:06
PROESL

Re: Are these sentences correct?

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Originally Posted by Zoe2008

Please send us a copy of your debit note (no. xxx) to clarify, as you had deducted USD600.00 from our payment

Mary requested to pull in the schedule from Oct to first of Sept, please expedite your LC to us ASAP

Please release the shipping order to us as early as you can, we expected deliver the goods next week. looking for your promptly reply.

Here are my suggestions, corrections, and revisions.

Please, send us a copy of your debit note (no. xxx) to clarify your reason for deducting USD600.00 from our payment.

Mary requested that we pull in the schedule from October to the first of September. Please, expedite your LC to us ASAP.

> I have a question in order to be clear about what I'm reading and correcting here: What does "pull in" mean here, and who is supposed to do it? <

Please, release the shipping order to us as early as you can. We expected to deliver the goods next week. We look forward to your prompt reply.
21-Aug-2009, 12:09
Anglika

Re: Are these sentences correct?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zoe2008

Please send us a copy of your debit note (no. xxx) to clarify your deduction of USD600.00 from our payment

Mary would like the schedule to be changed from delivery in October to 1st September. Please expedite your LC to us ASAP

Please release the shipping order to us as early as you can. We expect to deliver the goods next week. Looking for your promptly reply.

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