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Old 20-Feb-2005, 20:24
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Hi,everybody, describing or writing about oneself is not difficult. One can write very good about him / her. The words one say or write does not put them in practice generally. One can be understood by meeting not his writing or words.
I am a sincere,vivacious,versatile,realistic,shy,consider ate, non-materialistic and sensible person.


My wife will not work after marriage as I need a wife for 24 hour. I will assist her and so she.
Important things for good marital life :
Partner should have the sameness in opinion ( at least 75%) and body type of partner also be as per my likings.
My wife should be broad-minded,healthy and intelligent. I do not estimate a person from her / his status or family background. Her caste and religion is of no concern to me. I would be very happy to have a South Indian,Gujrati or Maharashtrian girl. My favourite outfit for a female after lingerie is Saree. I do not follow traditional rits. I love to break rules sometimes.
My favourites : Language Urdu, Spot : Goan beaches,
I am sure if I succeed to find a partner of my choice I wouldn’t come out for months after marriage.

Profession : business ( peaceful and small business). I love my work I do. Income reasonable. I am not very ambitious.
Past : Very dark and horrible.
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I'd take this out:
Past : Very dark and horrible.
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