are these sentence correct

[scott833]

1) Can you check and see if the lesson you thought me was recorded properly on the player. ( Teacher taught me english, and i recorded everything)
2) The teacher recorded the part that i am weak in on the player.(record the pronounciation and all the other part that i am weak in).
3) I hope i am not intruding your space (sit down at a table when there is another person).

[2006]

1) Can you check and see if the lesson you taught me was recorded properly on the player.

( Teacher taught me english, and I recorded everything.)

2) The teacher recorded the part that I am weak in on the player.

(record the pronunciation and all the other parts that I am weak in).

3) I hope I am not intruding into your space.

(sit down at a table when there is another person already there).

2006