How would we express this??

[anupumh]

Hi,

Is the above mentioned sentence appropriate?
What other ways can the same thought be expressed?

He has got severe injuries on his head and his stomach.

Thanks

[2006]

Hi,

Is the sentence below appropriate?
What other ways can the same thought be expressed?

He has got severe injuries on his head and his stomach. I wouldn't say this.
He has severe injuries to his head and abdomen.
Thanks

2006