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Hi,
I am glad to have discovered this resource and hope I am posting to the correct forum. I would like help on how to improve a dense sentence structure. Here is some sample text from an job interview feedback form:
"He may do well in an IT staff position that requires little change in routine, but at his current level of development, not in a consulting role such as an Analyst."
"He may do well in an IT staff position that requires little change in routine, but at his current level of development, not in a consulting role such as an Analyst."
Welcome, Mic.
What about?
"He may do well in an IT staff position that requires little change in routine, but not in a consulting role such as an Analyst given his current level of development."
Improving dense sentence structure 
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