Please correct my texts

[Zoe2008]

We cannot reach Peter since 02 Nov. He did not sign back the cancellation letter for current transferable LC (no. xxx) which caused we cannot draw the payment from your original LC. Would you please accept change the payment from LC to TT for these 1000 pcs air goods? Please confirm.

There is no problem transfer the LC to the factory in China. The transferee’s bank will advise to the transferor’s bank once the LC is received. We will also send them a copy once the LC is done. Please don’t worry. They have been received three sets transferable LC last week.

[pyoung]

Dear Zoe:

We cannot reach Peter since 02 Nov.
We have not been able to reach Peter since Nov. 2. (or 2 Nov.)
He did not sign back the cancellation letter for current transferable LC (no. xxx) which caused we cannot draw the payment from your original LC.
He did not countersign (not sure what you mean by 'sign back') the cancellation letter for the current transferable LC xxx. As a result, we cannot draw the payment from your original LC.
Would you please accept change the payment from LC to TT for these 1000 pcs air goods? Please confirm.
Please confirm whether you are willing to accept the change in payment from LC to TT for these 1000 pcs of air goods.
There is no problem transfer the LC to the factory in China.
It is no problem to transfer the LC to the factory in China.
The transferee’s bank will advise to the transferor’s bank once the LC is received.
The receiving bank will notify the bank of origin once the LC is received. (Unless 'transferee' and 'transferor' are commonly understood terms in your industry, in which case you should use them.)
We will also send them a copy once the LC is done.
We will send them a copy of the details of the transaction once it is completed.
Please don’t worry.
or, Please do not be concerned.
They have been received three sets transferable LC last week.
Three sets of transferable LC were received last week.

I hope this is helpful,

Petra

PS: What do 'LC' and 'TT' stand for? Knowing this will help with interpretation of your correspondence. Thanks!

[Zoe2008]

Hi Petra,

Thank you for your correct.

1. My meaning of sign back - consent and signature the letter then return back to the bank

2. The receiving bank will notify the bank of origin once the LC is received. (Unless 'transferee' and 'transferor' are commonly understood terms in your industry, in which case you should use them.) - Yes, it is better for your sugguestion as 'transferee' and 'transferor' is not commonly

3. LC and TT - They are payment terms
LC = Letter of credit : We need send the document to bank after
shipment, draw the money via bank from customer
TT = Telegraphic Transfer

Regards
Zoe

[pyoung]

Hi, Zoe:

Hi Petra,

Thank you for your correct.

1. My meaning of sign back - consent and signature the letter then return back to the bank Perhaps: He has not yet returned the signed cancellation letter.

2. The receiving bank will notify the bank of origin once the LC is received. (Unless 'transferee' and 'transferor' are commonly understood terms in your industry, in which case you should use them.) - Yes, it is better for your sugguestion as 'transferee' and 'transferor' is not commonly

3. LC and TT - They are payment terms
LC = Letter of credit : We need send the document to bank after
shipment, draw the money via bank from customer
TT = Telegraphic Transfer

Regards
Zoe

Thanks for the extra information. It will be very helpful,

Petra