Kindly check my sentences
Diamond Ids presents Shooting Stars Collection
Shooting Stars Collection presented by Diamond Ids
Diamond Idsí shooting stars collection
Kindly let me know which is the best line for the headline and if there is any other way to write, kindly suggest
Re: Kindly check my sentences
Originally Posted by new2grammar
If this will be used as a headline, I would write: Diamond Ids presents Its Shooting Stars Collection. As a headline, though, Diamond Ids presents Shooting Stars Collection will work.
Is it a headline designed to promote the products? If so, Diamond Ids Presents Its Exciting (or some other adjective: exclusive/glamorous/etc.) New Shooting Stars Collection might also work.