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19-Nov-2009, 12:06
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 Kindly check my sentences Shooting Stars Collection presented by Diamond Ids Diamond Ids’ shooting stars collection Kindly let me know which is the best line for the headline and if there is any other way to write, kindly suggest |
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21-Nov-2009, 03:39
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| Re: Kindly check my sentences Quote:
If this will be used as a headline, I would write: Diamond Ids presents Its Shooting Stars Collection. As a headline, though, Diamond Ids presents Shooting Stars Collection will work. Is it a headline designed to promote the products? If so, Diamond Ids Presents Its Exciting (or some other adjective: exclusive/glamorous/etc.) New Shooting Stars Collection might also work. Petra new2grammar likes this. |
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