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Old 19-Nov-2009, 12:44
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Dear teachers,

It is not u ntil it was getting dark_______ the child remembered to go back home.
a. when b. that
The key is "a". But the structure of emphatic sentence is:

It is ....that .....
It is ....who......
Could you please explain why ''a'' is correct? Or is it a mistake?

Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you in advance.

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Old 19-Nov-2009, 14:12
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Dear teachers,

It is not u ntil it was getting dark_______ the child remembered to go back home.
a. when b. that
The key is "a". But the structure of emphatic sentence is:

It is ....that .....
It is ....who......
Could you please explain why ''a'' is correct? Or is it a mistake?

Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you in advance.

Jiang
Here 'b' is correct. Let us rearrange the sentence:
It is not that the child remembered to go back home, until it was getting dark.(In fact he wanted to go back before sun-set.)
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It is was not until it was getting dark that the child remembered to go back home.
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Here 'b' is correct.
I 'm clueless about your answer since "a" seems correct to me
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If it's just a straight-forward statement, then when would be okay: It was getting dark when the child remembered to go home. It was September when the truth was revealed at last. It was 10 when the doctor finally saw me for my 8:30 appointment.

However, the structure "It was not until X" requires the "that."

It was not until it was getting dark that...
It wasn't until September that...
It wasn't until 10 that....
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Dear Barb_D,

Thank you very much for your explanation.
Could you please kindly explain how to distinguish a "straight-forward" statement and an emphatic sentence?
For example, do you mean in the following sentence if it is in negative form then both are correct?
It was getting dark when the child remembered to go home.
But emphatic sentences are not necessarily negative sentence.
Or do you mean if it is a statement then the two choice "when" and "that" won't be put together as choices?

Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you in advance.

jiang

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If it's just a straight-forward statement, then when would be okay: It was getting dark when the child remembered to go home. It was September when the truth was revealed at last. It was 10 when the doctor finally saw me for my 8:30 appointment.

However, the structure "It was not until X" requires the "that."

It was not until it was getting dark that...
It wasn't until September that...
It wasn't until 10 that....
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Old 20-Nov-2009, 13:41
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We know that when modifies a noun of time:
  • It was midnight when the child remembered to go home.
  • Midnight was when the child remembered to go home.
The question is, does when work here?
  • It wasn't until midnight when the child remembered to go home.

That is, can the when-clause look inside the preposition phrase until midnight and modify the noun midnight? The answer is No. It cannot.

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But then, why is (b) that correct? The answer is in the subject's referent:

  • It wasn't until midnight that the child remembered.
  • That the child remembered wasn't until midnight.
  • When the child remembered wasn't until midnight.


Hope that helps.
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Dear Soup,

Thank you very much for your explanation.
I still feel it confusing. To me the difference is "not". Can I understand it this way:
When the child remembered to go home was midnight.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you in advance.
Have a nice weekend.
Jiang
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We know that when modifies a noun of time:
  • It was midnight when the child remembered to go home.
  • Midnight was when the child remembered to go home.
The question is, does when work here?
  • It wasn't until midnight when the child remembered to go home.
That is, can the when-clause look inside the preposition phrase until midnight and modify the noun midnight? The answer is No. It cannot.

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But then, why is (b) that correct? The answer is in the subject's referent:

  • It wasn't until midnight that the child remembered.
  • That the child remembered wasn't until midnight.
  • When the child remembered wasn't until midnight.

Hope that helps.
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To me the difference is "not". Can I understand it this way: When the child remembered to go home was midnight.
Your original example sentence reads like this: the child remembered to go back home, but not until it was too late as it/the sky was getting dark. In other words, by the time the child remembered to go back home the sky was getting dark.


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[1] When has several functions, one of which it to express at the time of <event>,

  • It was cold when I woke up this morning.
  • When I woke up this morning it was cold.
    • At the time of waking up, it was cold.

[2] Another function of when is to tell us which action happened first:

  • I turned on the heater when I woke up.
  • When I woke up I turned on the heater.
    • 1st event: I woke up
    • 2nd event: I turned on the heater
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