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    Hi,

    Is this sentence correct?

    "After so many years of being picked on by, it was my turn to be a little higher on the totem pole."

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    MG.

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    Default Re: Being picked on by…

    Yes, it's correct. But it could be said this way:After so many years of having been picked on by, it was my turn to be a little higher on the totem pole.

    Thus, using the perfect participle passive (having been picked on...), we emphasize the fact that the activity of being picked on by (superiors) happened before my rising in the hierarchy.
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    Default Re: Being picked on by…

    Quote Originally Posted by musicgold View Post
    Hi,

    Is this sentence correct?

    "After so many years of being picked on by, it was my turn to be a little higher on the totem pole."

    Thanks,

    MG.
    I can't see the purpose of "by" in this sentence. Otherwise it's alright.
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    Default Re: Being picked on by…

    I'll be stronger than Ray. The "by" is incorrect unless you state who was picking on you.
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