need some help, please

[b.a.d.]

Hello again. Would you mind helping me with just a few lines? Thanks in advance. That is the subject:

People speaks Tsar Cannon's thunder
When it has the will to wonder
If you're the true ruler of the land

By "speak" I mean uses "cannon's thunder" as the way of comunicating, in other words - they fight. So would this construction be correct?

[b.a.d.]

Please! Is it correct or not?

[omasta]

Hello again. Would you mind helping me with just a few lines? Thanks in advance. That is the subject:

People speaks Tsar Cannon's thunder
When it has the will to wonder
If you're the true ruler of the land

By "speak" I mean uses "cannon's thunder" as the way of comunicating, in other words - they fight. So would this construction be correct?

Hi!

I'm not a teacher.

It's a bit bombastic in form and somehow fuzzy in substance.

[b.a.d.]

Man, thanks a lot, but I don't neen no sarcasm, I need to know whether it is grammaticaly correct or not.

[Barb_D]

Try it with "the Tsar's cannons' thunder" if you mean the many cannons that belong to the Tsar.

I'm not great with poetry, but I had a hard time understanding what you meant.