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After my first year at Nova, I have earned a place on the ILSA Journal of International & Comparative Law.

[Marylin]

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what is wrong with this sentence?

After my first year at Nova, I have earned a place on the ILSA Journal of International & Comparative Law.

It sounds good, except I would use in except of on


After my first year at Nova, I have earned a place in the ILSA Journal of International & Comparative Law.

[Mieka]

Could someone please help me?
is this sentence using the word artifical correctly?

The show was very magical, but I felt that it was a tad artificial.

[Tdol]

Mieka, it's fine- as a British speaker, I like your use of 'tad'. By the way, if you want to ask a question, it's better to start a new thread because then people know that there is a question to be answered. If you tag a question on at the end of an existing thread, it might look like a question that has been answered and not be read. If I see a question I haven't readwith three posts, I might not open it because it looks like question/answer/thanks or response, whereas if we see a thread with no answers, people are almost certain to open it.