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  1. 10-Dec-2009, 13:44 #1
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    Default Kindly check my sentences and give your suggestion

    Love:

    Unison of two makes a marvelous masterpiece

    Love knots two hearts into one soul.

    Love looks not with the eyes, but with the heart.

    Unison of two hearts as a soul is called a true love.

    Eternity.

    Love, like pure magic, is life's sweet mystery!!

    Love is the emblem of eternity.

    It’s a bond of eternity.

    Love is a binding of soul & heart unto eternity.


    Its basically headline for jewellery. Kindly let me know how is it, its jewellery for Knot collection(love). Please suggest me if any modification is needed
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    Exclamation Re: Kindly check my sentences and give your suggestion

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Love:

    Unison of two makes a marvelous masterpiece

    Love knots two hearts into one soul.

    Love looks not with the eyes, but with the heart.

    Unison of two hearts as a soul is called a true love.

    Eternity.

    Love, like pure magic, is life's sweet mystery!!

    Love is the emblem of eternity.

    It’s a bond of eternity.

    Love is a binding of soul & heart unto eternity.


    Its basically headline for jewellery. Kindly let me know how is it, its jewellery for Knot collection(love). Please suggest me if any modification is needed
    All are fine. I would prefer the ones highlighted.
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