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[Unregistered]

let's we hold our hands together, open our eyes and hearts

is it correct?

[omasta]

let's we hold our hands together, open our eyes and hearts

is it correct?

Hi!

I'm not a teacher.

The correct forms are:

1. Let's hold our hands together, open our eyes and hearts.

2. Let us hold our hands together, open our eyes and hearts.

[Barb_D]

Two comments:
1. As I read it, "Let's (or Let us) hold our hands together" does not mean I hold your hand while you hold his hand, etc. It doesn't mean I take your hands in mine. It means we each hold our own two hands together. I'm not sure if this is what you mean.

2. The comma doesn't work there -- use "and" instead.

So I suggest either: Let's join hands and open our eyes and our hearts or "Let's each clasp our hands together [in prayer?] as we open our eyes and our hearts."