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  1. 16-Dec-2009, 19:27 #1
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    Default correct this paragraph please!!

    ......also, the driving permission, in law, we won't be able to drive before the age of 18, i am 16 , and i can drive very well, should i wait for another two years to get my permission??
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    Default Re: correct this paragraph please!!

    Quote Originally Posted by julianna View Post
    ......also, the driving permission, in law, we won't be able to drive before the age of 18, i am 16 , and i can drive very well, should i wait for another two years to get my permission??
    It's ok but capitalise the "i's".
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