The text for advertising

[svetik]

Could you please check the following text for grammar and the choice of vocabulary
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I give (present) a big choice of procedures taking into account your individual wishes and needs and according to your skin types: deep-cleaning and nutritious procedures, moisturizing procedures, procedures for oily and mixed skin. Procedures for your eyes, neck and décolleté, machine cosmetology,express procedures for business people, epilation, eye lashes and eye brows tinting.
Manicure and pedicure is a professional care for nails which I make with high quality.
With me you will experience pleasure from the process and the result of my work.
I’ll realize your dreams. My work will inspire your self reliance and raise your self esteem.

[svetik]

The choice of words depends on who you are writing to. If this is a study of language, it needs some editing. If this is truly an advertising piece, it needs editing and should include some action words. For advertising, make the reader the important person - not you. Let me know what you want this piece to do and I can help more.

Yes, I'm writing this piece to a person who might be interested in my services, it's kind of adverising.
I want the message to be clear and informative.
Thank you

[Anglika]

Could you please check the following text for grammar and the choice of vocabulary
Thank you
I give (present) a big offer a wide choice of procedures taking into account your individual wishes and needs and according to your skin type. Amongst my services are: deep-cleansing and nutritious procedures, moisturizing procedures, procedures for oily and mixed skin, care of sensitive skin areas (such as that round the eyes). Procedures for your eyes, neck and décolleté, machine cosmetology,express procedures for business people, depilation, eye-lash and eyebrow tinting.
I also can provide Manicures and pedicures, using high wuality products. is a professional care for nails which I make with high quality.
With me you will experience pleasure from the process and the result of my work.
I’ll realize your dreams. My work will inspire your self-assurance and raise your self esteem.

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